Post by Tornstar on Mar 25, 2008 1:27:13 GMT -5
Name: Tornshadow
Clan: Ghostclan
Age: 42 moons
Rank: Leader (If there is none and if there is im Deputy)
Gender: Tom
Appearance: Fur- A dark shadowy pelt with many long scars going down his pelt from many battles. Its length is an average cats fur length.(Have no clue how long that is) The tip of his tail is shockingly white compared to the rest of his dark pelt.
Eyes- Great big red eyes with seemingly bottomless dark pools for pupils. Hidden behind this spooky appearance is a hint of gold lining his pupil. There is no whites of his eyes only blood red. When he's mad his eyes look like a window with blood oozing down it.
Build- A cat with broad shoulders but frighteningly small. (Like Scourge from the books) Strong haunches and unsually long claws underneath very small paws. His muscles ripple under his pelt as he walks.
Other-His claws are as long as Tigerclaw's and his paws seem too small to even hold regular ones. His whiskers are so long that sometimes he has to cut them. His tail is as long as his own body.
Nightly Appearance- At the new moon this tom blends in perfectly with all of his surroundings. No one can see him at all EVER. During the full moon he seems to look like a ghostly StarClan warrior.
Short Description: A tom with lean powerful muscles rippling under his jet black pelt, he's very secretive and doesn't like to talk about his past. Under his tiny paws he has long claws like Tigerclaw's and sinks them deep in the ground when he's frustrated or nervous though he tries not to show he's nervous. Every time he talks to a certain she-cat he likes he chokes up but when talking to his clanmates or giving orders he's not afraid to intimidate or talk back to even StarClan if it's about something that can harm his Clan. He's also very tiny.
Personality: Kits- He likes kits but is easily annoyed by them but loves to play with them when they are bored. He gaurds kits more fiercly then their own mothers because of his history.
Apprentices- Though Tornshadow's never had an apprentice he longingly wishes for one. He thinks apprentices are the est thing since fresh-kill. He knows they're hard work to train but he thinks he can do it.
Warriors- He's sorta anti-social and he only talk when spoken to or when he needs to make a point about something crucial. He thinks all warriors in other clans except his are disloyal but he appreciates all their hard work for their clan.
Medicine cats- Likes and appreciates all their hard work and dedication. He likes to help them at times when they really need it. He sometimes thinks that he should have been a Medicine cats but hen he thinks no.
Leaders and Deputies- He admires them but can't help but think that they sometimes make very mousebrained decisions that bite them back in the end. So he plots against them so he can actaully make them listen to his ideas instead of ignoring him.
Elders- He hates annoying elders and just plain ignores all elders thinking their all annoying. He never sees elders alot and as an apprentice he was never assigned to take care of them because of his attitude towards them.
Cats in other clans- He's an easy going cat and just shrugs off the tensions. But when another cat insults him he teaches them a lesson they won't soon forget. He's a really lonley cat he likes alot of she-cats but they all think he's a loser because of his size.
Cats without clans- Tornshadow despises kittypets and rogues but at the same time he's curious about how they are able to live with Twolegs or outside a clan.
Overall Personality- A anti-social tom who is a Medicine cat fan and is rejected by she-cats because of his size so he's lonley. Likes everyone but plots against them because of their mousebrained decisions that hurt their clan.
History: All of family died in a rogue attack on camp. Since his only thought to be his only sister’s death he has set out to kill the rogue who killed her. His name is Tornshadow for all the death and back-stabbing that has happened around him at his age of 3 moons. Also wherever he goes he seems to bring a sudden chill in the air. Everyone likes him whilst they are afraid at the same time. He hates getting treated this way and feels that everyoone else is being mean to him. Since nobody can talk to him and stay comfortable he doesn't know at all that he is frightning everyone else and they are not being mean. He swore that if he finds his sister he will protecet her with his life.
Role Play example: As Tornshadow padded silently towards Leafpelt's den,whiskers twithching in anger, he thought to himself darn filthy clan cats how could they intturupt them espeically during the Gathering?! When he reached the medicne cats den he asked Leafpelt, " Are u all right i know ur busy all day but i need to ask have you heard anything from Starclan about my sister?" he asked, " I really need to know." "Oh I'm sorry Tornshadow, no." she answered downcast. "Thanks for the cobwebs Leafpelt!" Tornshadow called over his shoulder as he made his way to his den by the thorn bush."Stay off that leg for a while ok." she called to him. Whether he heard or didn't she didn't know for he had already slipped into the den. 'I'll get those filthy clans one day' he thought as he slipped off into a dreamless sleep.....
Clan: Ghostclan
Age: 42 moons
Rank: Leader (If there is none and if there is im Deputy)
Gender: Tom
Appearance: Fur- A dark shadowy pelt with many long scars going down his pelt from many battles. Its length is an average cats fur length.(Have no clue how long that is) The tip of his tail is shockingly white compared to the rest of his dark pelt.
Eyes- Great big red eyes with seemingly bottomless dark pools for pupils. Hidden behind this spooky appearance is a hint of gold lining his pupil. There is no whites of his eyes only blood red. When he's mad his eyes look like a window with blood oozing down it.
Build- A cat with broad shoulders but frighteningly small. (Like Scourge from the books) Strong haunches and unsually long claws underneath very small paws. His muscles ripple under his pelt as he walks.
Other-His claws are as long as Tigerclaw's and his paws seem too small to even hold regular ones. His whiskers are so long that sometimes he has to cut them. His tail is as long as his own body.
Nightly Appearance- At the new moon this tom blends in perfectly with all of his surroundings. No one can see him at all EVER. During the full moon he seems to look like a ghostly StarClan warrior.
Short Description: A tom with lean powerful muscles rippling under his jet black pelt, he's very secretive and doesn't like to talk about his past. Under his tiny paws he has long claws like Tigerclaw's and sinks them deep in the ground when he's frustrated or nervous though he tries not to show he's nervous. Every time he talks to a certain she-cat he likes he chokes up but when talking to his clanmates or giving orders he's not afraid to intimidate or talk back to even StarClan if it's about something that can harm his Clan. He's also very tiny.
Personality: Kits- He likes kits but is easily annoyed by them but loves to play with them when they are bored. He gaurds kits more fiercly then their own mothers because of his history.
Apprentices- Though Tornshadow's never had an apprentice he longingly wishes for one. He thinks apprentices are the est thing since fresh-kill. He knows they're hard work to train but he thinks he can do it.
Warriors- He's sorta anti-social and he only talk when spoken to or when he needs to make a point about something crucial. He thinks all warriors in other clans except his are disloyal but he appreciates all their hard work for their clan.
Medicine cats- Likes and appreciates all their hard work and dedication. He likes to help them at times when they really need it. He sometimes thinks that he should have been a Medicine cats but hen he thinks no.
Leaders and Deputies- He admires them but can't help but think that they sometimes make very mousebrained decisions that bite them back in the end. So he plots against them so he can actaully make them listen to his ideas instead of ignoring him.
Elders- He hates annoying elders and just plain ignores all elders thinking their all annoying. He never sees elders alot and as an apprentice he was never assigned to take care of them because of his attitude towards them.
Cats in other clans- He's an easy going cat and just shrugs off the tensions. But when another cat insults him he teaches them a lesson they won't soon forget. He's a really lonley cat he likes alot of she-cats but they all think he's a loser because of his size.
Cats without clans- Tornshadow despises kittypets and rogues but at the same time he's curious about how they are able to live with Twolegs or outside a clan.
Overall Personality- A anti-social tom who is a Medicine cat fan and is rejected by she-cats because of his size so he's lonley. Likes everyone but plots against them because of their mousebrained decisions that hurt their clan.
History: All of family died in a rogue attack on camp. Since his only thought to be his only sister’s death he has set out to kill the rogue who killed her. His name is Tornshadow for all the death and back-stabbing that has happened around him at his age of 3 moons. Also wherever he goes he seems to bring a sudden chill in the air. Everyone likes him whilst they are afraid at the same time. He hates getting treated this way and feels that everyoone else is being mean to him. Since nobody can talk to him and stay comfortable he doesn't know at all that he is frightning everyone else and they are not being mean. He swore that if he finds his sister he will protecet her with his life.
Role Play example: As Tornshadow padded silently towards Leafpelt's den,whiskers twithching in anger, he thought to himself darn filthy clan cats how could they intturupt them espeically during the Gathering?! When he reached the medicne cats den he asked Leafpelt, " Are u all right i know ur busy all day but i need to ask have you heard anything from Starclan about my sister?" he asked, " I really need to know." "Oh I'm sorry Tornshadow, no." she answered downcast. "Thanks for the cobwebs Leafpelt!" Tornshadow called over his shoulder as he made his way to his den by the thorn bush."Stay off that leg for a while ok." she called to him. Whether he heard or didn't she didn't know for he had already slipped into the den. 'I'll get those filthy clans one day' he thought as he slipped off into a dreamless sleep.....
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