Post by Wildstorm on Jul 19, 2008 16:35:19 GMT -5
Dawn light shone down on the Shadowclan Camp. Wildstorm glanced up shortly, but quickly locked her gaze on the fat vole she was behind. She was a tail length away...it was walking very slowly, so she knew she would get it. 'How stupid...' she thought, a smirk curling onto her face. She licked her lips, already knowing the taste of it.
She was a Mouse length away now...all she had to do was...POUNCE! She quickly jumped onto it. She looked into her paws, but it wasn't there. She suddenly saw it's fur, scampering faster now. She took long strides, needing to catch up with it.
'I want this...I need this!' she thought. Her heart pounded. Her lungs burned, but she carried on. 'I have to do this' she thought. It was a 3 good tail lengths away from her.
She ran faster now, her fur blowing back in the wind. A long, dark cloud covered the sky, possibly hinting at rain. 'That's no good..' she thought. She knew she wouldn't be able to catch it if it began raining! And just as soon as she thought that, ran spattered down onto the ground.
'Foxdung!' she thought shortly. Her paws suddenly slid from under her. She yelped as she landed on her side, but then noticed she was coming closer to the vole. 'Yes! Yes!' she thought cheerily. She thought out her plan.
She would have no time to do this again...She stood back onto her paws, letting the rain to it's job. She jumped, and her paws skidded. 'Nows my chance!' She went right by the vole. She quickly sunk her teeth into it. She savored the delicious taste in her mouthe, but she was going to take it back for the kits or the elders.
Her paws slid from under her again, but she kept her teeth clamped around it. She suddenly saw a thick tree, and dug her claws into it. She supported herself up, and then started running back to camp, carefully avoiding slippery spots.
~~~Thats my example for you. If I need to make it more detailed or something, I will.~~~
She was a Mouse length away now...all she had to do was...POUNCE! She quickly jumped onto it. She looked into her paws, but it wasn't there. She suddenly saw it's fur, scampering faster now. She took long strides, needing to catch up with it.
'I want this...I need this!' she thought. Her heart pounded. Her lungs burned, but she carried on. 'I have to do this' she thought. It was a 3 good tail lengths away from her.
She ran faster now, her fur blowing back in the wind. A long, dark cloud covered the sky, possibly hinting at rain. 'That's no good..' she thought. She knew she wouldn't be able to catch it if it began raining! And just as soon as she thought that, ran spattered down onto the ground.
'Foxdung!' she thought shortly. Her paws suddenly slid from under her. She yelped as she landed on her side, but then noticed she was coming closer to the vole. 'Yes! Yes!' she thought cheerily. She thought out her plan.
She would have no time to do this again...She stood back onto her paws, letting the rain to it's job. She jumped, and her paws skidded. 'Nows my chance!' She went right by the vole. She quickly sunk her teeth into it. She savored the delicious taste in her mouthe, but she was going to take it back for the kits or the elders.
Her paws slid from under her again, but she kept her teeth clamped around it. She suddenly saw a thick tree, and dug her claws into it. She supported herself up, and then started running back to camp, carefully avoiding slippery spots.
~~~Thats my example for you. If I need to make it more detailed or something, I will.~~~
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