Post by Tornstar on Jul 13, 2008 20:40:37 GMT -5
Name: Tornstar
Clan: ShadowClan
Rank: Leader
Age: 38 moons
Gender: Tom
[glow=red,2,300]Description:[/glow] Large tom with a silvery blue pelt that is always sleek and shiny. His eyes are silver with red pupils, yet they seem sightless they have seen more than any normal warrior has seen in his lifetime. His tail-tip is a distinct white. His muscles ripple as he walks. He is a fairly normal sized cat but with tremendous strength. Though his claws are normal sized they are sharper than an eagle's talons. His teeth are always gleaming white and kept sharp.
His pelt has an unknown tint that she-cats can almost never keep their paws off. His eyes look as if they can pierce right through you and read your thoughts. His tail is abnormally long which helps him to always land on his feet even more gracefully. When he looks into a she-cats eyes they can't turn away they are just awed by his eyes and absolutly love him. His ears are regular sized but the tips are a golden brown.
He has many scars across his pelt, too many for anyone to believe that he really is alive still. His scars are from many past battles from when he was once a rogue. His pelt has a secial sheen in the moonlight that makes him look like a ghost and his scars seem to glow during a full moon giving a better effect to make him look ghostly. His whiskers are always unkempt, he had long ago abandoned trying to straighten them.
His paws are normal sized yet they conceal huge sharp claws. His claws have never been ripped, dulled, or cut off so his claws are pretty deadly. They are pale white and when Torn swipes it looks like a flash of white lighting.
[glow=red,2,300]Personality:[/glow] Loves to fight to prove his strength. Is always searching for someone who is powerful so he can have fun. He could care less about others feelings and hates it when kits are around him. All he wants is an opponent who is powerful enough so that he can go full force on them. He doesn't pull out his full strength on people alot weaker so he can at least drain out alittle fun. He declares himself the strongest, and he knows it's true for he has, so far, never been beaten.
During the times he's strict it's best to stay away because if one thing is out of order he gets very ticked. He's always had a temper problem, caused on by being beat as a kit and he kept the pain inside. The reason he hates kits is because he's afraid of hurting them just as his father hurt him. He's very protective to the one he loves, as soon as there is someone he loves again.
He can tolerate elders for quite a long time with their complaining but when enoughs enough he merely leaves and doesn't return. He always used to fight with the warriors for both training and fueds. He was always the best and looked for fights where he can go full force but no one seemed to be that strong. He still looks for that one person he go all out on.
[glow=red,2,300]History:[/glow] Ever since he was an apprentice he has possessed great strength and always fought with the other apprentices. He got into endless trouble and he didn't know why. He had thought if he could prove his strength he'd be recognized and never left out and forgotten. The other apprentices didn't even acknowledge him by even taunting him. So for his life he has been gaining stregth in huge amounts and with it, recognition in miniscule amounts. He never could get enough recognition from what he thought so he ran away and became a rogue, and he then, when the age of a warrior, joined Shadowclan and got the name Tornstar. He came from the noblest of clans.......... Thunderclan.
He left Thunderclan because he was not recognized enough and was always put with the apprentice tasks. He ran to the only clan that respected great strength, Shadowclan. When he came there he begged for hours to allow him to join. In the end the leader decided to make him fight for his place. He was paired up against a tom named Tigerheart in a fight to the death. From plain ignorance and sheer madness, Tornstar, formerly known as Spiritflame, ruthlessly beat his opponent. He was accepted into the clan and was known to all to not piss him off.
When he enetered Shadowclan he had long forgotten what clan he was once in and desperatly tries to remember, with all he has as a lead is a she-cat he remembers vaguely. When one night at a Gathering he sees the cat from his memories. He walks up to her and says, "Do you..... know who I am?" and she replies, "Yeah a filthy Shadowclan scum." He was heartbroken, he was sure this was his mother but she didn't seem to recognize him. He never saw her again, at Gatherings or anything.
He eventually gained higher postions and still she never showed. When he finally became leader he worked up the courage to ask Trickstar who and where she was. He was told her name was Goldenmoon but had turned her name to Tornheart after she lost her only kit. Since she knew it was hopeless to ever find him so she gave up on life and died an unpeaceful and sad death.
His apprentice had always been a fiesty one and was destined to one day get into serious trouble. Well one day Tornstar and his apprentice were patroling the border and the small cat had thought he'd seen a Shadowclan cat and had run across the Thunderpath. As he was streaking across a Twoleg monster came by. Tornstar had yelled "NOOOOO!!" and his apprentice stopped stock still and turned to the oncoming monster in seemingly slow motion. Next thing he knew his apprentice was gone with his blood splattered across the Thunderpath.
He had run from his new clan that very night, and ran towards the waterfal, he jumped off! The next morning he woke up and thought why he wasn't dead. But every night he seemed to glow like a ghost and on full moons looked as if he really was a ghost. Is he really a ghost, died from jumping off the cliff, or just some wierd apparation in the moonlight? Will anyone ever know??? *creepy ending music*
Clan: ShadowClan
Rank: Leader
Age: 38 moons
Gender: Tom
[glow=red,2,300]Description:[/glow] Large tom with a silvery blue pelt that is always sleek and shiny. His eyes are silver with red pupils, yet they seem sightless they have seen more than any normal warrior has seen in his lifetime. His tail-tip is a distinct white. His muscles ripple as he walks. He is a fairly normal sized cat but with tremendous strength. Though his claws are normal sized they are sharper than an eagle's talons. His teeth are always gleaming white and kept sharp.
His pelt has an unknown tint that she-cats can almost never keep their paws off. His eyes look as if they can pierce right through you and read your thoughts. His tail is abnormally long which helps him to always land on his feet even more gracefully. When he looks into a she-cats eyes they can't turn away they are just awed by his eyes and absolutly love him. His ears are regular sized but the tips are a golden brown.
He has many scars across his pelt, too many for anyone to believe that he really is alive still. His scars are from many past battles from when he was once a rogue. His pelt has a secial sheen in the moonlight that makes him look like a ghost and his scars seem to glow during a full moon giving a better effect to make him look ghostly. His whiskers are always unkempt, he had long ago abandoned trying to straighten them.
His paws are normal sized yet they conceal huge sharp claws. His claws have never been ripped, dulled, or cut off so his claws are pretty deadly. They are pale white and when Torn swipes it looks like a flash of white lighting.
[glow=red,2,300]Personality:[/glow] Loves to fight to prove his strength. Is always searching for someone who is powerful so he can have fun. He could care less about others feelings and hates it when kits are around him. All he wants is an opponent who is powerful enough so that he can go full force on them. He doesn't pull out his full strength on people alot weaker so he can at least drain out alittle fun. He declares himself the strongest, and he knows it's true for he has, so far, never been beaten.
During the times he's strict it's best to stay away because if one thing is out of order he gets very ticked. He's always had a temper problem, caused on by being beat as a kit and he kept the pain inside. The reason he hates kits is because he's afraid of hurting them just as his father hurt him. He's very protective to the one he loves, as soon as there is someone he loves again.
He can tolerate elders for quite a long time with their complaining but when enoughs enough he merely leaves and doesn't return. He always used to fight with the warriors for both training and fueds. He was always the best and looked for fights where he can go full force but no one seemed to be that strong. He still looks for that one person he go all out on.
[glow=red,2,300]History:[/glow] Ever since he was an apprentice he has possessed great strength and always fought with the other apprentices. He got into endless trouble and he didn't know why. He had thought if he could prove his strength he'd be recognized and never left out and forgotten. The other apprentices didn't even acknowledge him by even taunting him. So for his life he has been gaining stregth in huge amounts and with it, recognition in miniscule amounts. He never could get enough recognition from what he thought so he ran away and became a rogue, and he then, when the age of a warrior, joined Shadowclan and got the name Tornstar. He came from the noblest of clans.......... Thunderclan.
He left Thunderclan because he was not recognized enough and was always put with the apprentice tasks. He ran to the only clan that respected great strength, Shadowclan. When he came there he begged for hours to allow him to join. In the end the leader decided to make him fight for his place. He was paired up against a tom named Tigerheart in a fight to the death. From plain ignorance and sheer madness, Tornstar, formerly known as Spiritflame, ruthlessly beat his opponent. He was accepted into the clan and was known to all to not piss him off.
When he enetered Shadowclan he had long forgotten what clan he was once in and desperatly tries to remember, with all he has as a lead is a she-cat he remembers vaguely. When one night at a Gathering he sees the cat from his memories. He walks up to her and says, "Do you..... know who I am?" and she replies, "Yeah a filthy Shadowclan scum." He was heartbroken, he was sure this was his mother but she didn't seem to recognize him. He never saw her again, at Gatherings or anything.
He eventually gained higher postions and still she never showed. When he finally became leader he worked up the courage to ask Trickstar who and where she was. He was told her name was Goldenmoon but had turned her name to Tornheart after she lost her only kit. Since she knew it was hopeless to ever find him so she gave up on life and died an unpeaceful and sad death.
His apprentice had always been a fiesty one and was destined to one day get into serious trouble. Well one day Tornstar and his apprentice were patroling the border and the small cat had thought he'd seen a Shadowclan cat and had run across the Thunderpath. As he was streaking across a Twoleg monster came by. Tornstar had yelled "NOOOOO!!" and his apprentice stopped stock still and turned to the oncoming monster in seemingly slow motion. Next thing he knew his apprentice was gone with his blood splattered across the Thunderpath.
He had run from his new clan that very night, and ran towards the waterfal, he jumped off! The next morning he woke up and thought why he wasn't dead. But every night he seemed to glow like a ghost and on full moons looked as if he really was a ghost. Is he really a ghost, died from jumping off the cliff, or just some wierd apparation in the moonlight? Will anyone ever know??? *creepy ending music*
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