Moonjade as Moonspirit way back when....

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Moonspirits great multi-colored eyes flashed open with a flicker of dim light. The Nursery was a fine place to be and she had been their for a while taking care of, and helping Touchfrost with her kits. She yawned, now there were to many other cats in the den and it was the crowded nature that she had hated so. There was the Queens Touchfrost, and … Rainsong, who really didn’t understand Moonspirit and was bound and determined to make Moonspirit crash down her wrath upon her, and then there was the kits…. Sunrisekit, Shatteredkit, and Tigerkit, along with a dead kit, and Densekit… then there was Rainsongs six? Or was it Five kits… she couldn’t keep track after all, she wasn’t allowed near them… it was like a sad restraining order they had thrown upon Moonspirit and she silently hoped that through one of her kits Rainsong would come to need her help… though she hoped that the kits wouldn’t be hurt during the process.

She shook her fur and nodded to the queen, exhausted, and some what asleep her eyes seemed heavy and half shut, it was then when she saw the commotion outside. Moongaze and Amberkit were in the middle of the clearing, and two others were calling her name in frantic desperation. She Shook her head inwardly at Risingpaw who seemed to be having another one of her moments, and then turned her head to the mouth gaping open Ebonyspire, who was now in her den calling for her. “I must have been so consumed-“ ’Moonspirit, Moonspirit’ ‘Well… No one’s ever called me…. Unless they were kitting or dead.’ She thought silently… and then the fear struck her. She saw Amberkit with her limp head thrown partially off to the side.

Dashing over she dropped the left over poppy seeds from Touchfrost’s birthing and crouched beside Amberkit. “Hush Hush.” She growled to the other cats. “Moongaze…” her eyes shot up. “Back up.” She mewed… trying to be nicer then her normal… get the crap away from here… or Back off, though any way she said it, it still sounded condescending. She licked her lips as beads of wetness rolled down her lip. ‘Calm Moonspirit’ she spoke to herself. As she did this the sweat seemed to stop pouring and a serine sound of birds clicked off into her head. She had seen this behavior before in her Mentor when she died… it was like a disease, and no one knew any thing about it… even Moonspirit didn’t know about it… at all But, in her typical no worries and no panic fashion she would play it off like it was perfectly normal to learn about.

“Alright.” She mewed. She helped Amberkit’s head up and tried to force some poppies down her throat. “She was worked up… way to excited no?” She mumbled. She tried to pick the limp apprentice up and stand her up. Instead she helped the limp body sit up. “Moongaze, help her stay in this position…. Keep her conscious.” She mewed. “The poppies will make her even more tired and she started out un conscious any way.

She flicked Amberkit’s face with her tail… “Risingpaw come here and talk to her… its what you’re good at right?” She mewed. “Talk your heart out and try to make Amberkit respond…. And Ebonyspire, go fetch water soaked moss.” She mewed. She herself jumped up into her den faster then any cat had seen her move and then she came back out with some feverfew. She chewed it up slower, but into a slicker paste then normal and helped to slide that down as well. “When you get the wet moss you place some of it under her and some over her…. When you calm her down and get her body cooler she’ll proba- will wake up and be healthy again.” She mewed assuring as if she knew.

[Phantomstar]

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