Jetstreak

[jetstreak]

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Name: Jetstreak

Age (in moons): 15

Clan: River

Rank: warrior

Gender:female

Appearance: She has a watery grey pelt with some spots of black. She likes to keep her fur clean but she doesn't really like to do it that much. She isn't much when it comes to her fur color. When she is angry her fur stands up but other then that nothing is much with her pelt.

Personality: She has a very sweet personality. She will get mad but thats if she doesn't want any one to bug her. She likes to make all the other cats respect her by doing as much as she can to help the clan. She doesn't really do much but when she does she will never give up and try as hard as she can to prove herself. She can be a bit flirty with some of the toms but that is rare and will probably hardly ever happen.

History: She didn't really have much happen. All that did happen was that a big fight happened and her parents and siblings died during that time.

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[[C]laystar--]

You need WAY more detail.

Talk about all aspects of her appearence. Her pelt colour, consistency, density are all good. Her claws, how they are shapped, their colour and their size. her eye shape and colour. Her build in general. There is more to cat that fur colour.

As for personality, talk about how she acts around other cats, like her mentor, the deputy, the leader, the medicine cat, apprentices, elders, kits, queens, etc.

As for history, there is a lot more than 'not alot happened.' Talk about her life as a kit. When her family died, how did it happen? How did she feel? How did she feel about being apprenticed, and ehr mentor in general? How did she feel about her warrior ceremony? She's only fifteen moons, so it wasn't that long ago, two months at most. How does she like being a warrior, etc?

There is alot you can add.

[Coldfoot]

I'm sorry to inform you, Jetstream, but there is currently a ban on she-cats.